This happened last year winter vacations.
One of my friends messed up our vacation trip by not going on time .one of other friend held grudge against her she even tried to say sorry to her but she was still mad. Then she planed a surprise party to make up her mistake to make us all happy.
We learned from this situation that don't make plans before asking everyone.If make then stick to it. .
Good story - but I need more details for higher level writing. Please also read the instructions - you must have at least 3 paragraphs :) Edit and update - thanks!
ReplyDeleteSasdaf - you now have three paragraphs - good. But you need to write more than this - give some more details. What do you mean by not going on time? They didn't arrive on time? Remember capitalize the beginning of each sentence.
ReplyDelete-planned (not planed)
- make up for her mistake (not make up her mistake)
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